This week I got through the critiques for The Shadow Spy’s Wife, including all the track changes and either dealing with comments or putting them into a document for larger revisions–organized with the comments framed in the positive (what I can do, rather than what’s not working) and redundancies cut. I’ve done the recommended interleaving of stories and am just starting to put the notes for necessary changes into the scene in which I need to make that change.
This week: do the actual revisions. I’ve booked myself a week to do that phase, then a week for a final read-through, but that might be a stretch goal. We’ll see.