First draft done!


Wrote “the end”! Of course, there are revisions, next. I have a “to do” list.

Also, started teaching a Science Fiction course for the Alexandra Writers’ Center. I have 6 students and it looks like it’s going to be a great group!

Book Review: After You’ve Gone by Lori Hahnel


Literary 3/5

In 1935, Lita pulls herself out of poverty by becoming a jazz musician, while in the 1980s, her granddaughter, Elsa, struggles with the same tug-of-war between career and family. I really enjoyed the writing, the characters, and the dilemmas the women faced, as well as the lovingly portrayed environments the women found themselves in. Ultimately, though, it failed to grab me as a reader.

Midpoint re-plot for Shadow Spy’s Daughter


Did the midpoint re-plot for The Shadow Spy’s Daughter. I love my process. It didn’t change anything in the central plot line, but I had placeholder things like “Lilly gets a clue,” and I did the work to figure out, “who is the traitor and what did he do?” and how world events would impact stuff. I also did my analysis of what everyone was doing while offstage, and how to get other characters’ (important) backstories in without taking away from the energy. So: little “aha!” moments that enriched the central story. Things were going well, but this has opened a good little floodgate. Nice.

Susan